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Title: Navigation
Author: gardnerhill
Form/Wordcount: 370
Characters/Pairings: Sherlock Holmes/John Watson
Rating: G
Warnings/Content: None
Summary: Before a stag can stride through his domain he has to wobble to his fawn legs and fall down a few times.
Author’s Notes: For the Holmes Minor April 2020 prompt: Waving. This story is another part of the post-war Sussex series in this year's Holmes Minor 2020 offerings.



Step. Tap. Step. Tap. Thud. A bark of pain and a crash. A foul oath – this vile war has clearly stepped up the quality of military profanity as well as weaponry.

Turn from your newspaper.

A hand in the air, waving once from behind the guilty sofa.

Turn back and stay in your seat, pretending to read the newspaper as dragging and groaning sounds indicate that the swearing man is acquiring his footing once again.

#

Birdsong. Humming bees. Tapping stick over by the garden. A small pained sound – probably stubbed his foot on one of the stones bordering the rose beds. Crunch of gravel underfoot, a cry of distress at lost balance, a much louder crunch. Groaning.

A hand in the air, waving once before being used to push the owner up from the faceplant on the garden path.

Return to taking notes on hive number two. Sternly order your heart to stop panicking. You'd have made a dreadful parent.

#

A barked shin in the library. A waved hand.

A half-stumble down the staircase. One hand in a white-knuckled grip on the rail, the other waving once before rubbing the bruised knee.

A full face-plant against a bedpost. The hand not clamped around the nose waves.

#

Two weeks. Three. A full month since his return.

#

Step step step step step step. Tap tap. John unerringly navigates the stairs, crosses the parlour and swerves effortlessly into his seat at the breakfast table.

Crunch crunch crunch tap tap tap. John makes his way through the garden at his usual walking pace – with an occasional oath at a thorn-scratch as he stops to smell the roses.

In the main bedroom John rests his white cane by his bedside table, stows his shed clothing in the laundry hamper, gropes toward the bathroom, and returns from his ablutions to join his spouse under the covers. The bruises are fading.

Holmes holds him. "I believe I'm ready for the next step. And I promise I know a waved hand from a hand flung out asking for assistance."

Watson kisses him. "Good soldier."

Tomorrow, now that he has regained his body memory of the cottage, the blind man will re-acquaint himself with the path along the seacliff.

Date: 2020-04-26 04:41 am (UTC)
stonepicnicking_okapi: okapi (Default)
From: [personal profile] stonepicnicking_okapi
Lovely to read more of this 'verse.

Date: 2020-04-26 09:46 am (UTC)
smallhobbit: (Holmes Watson pipes)
From: [personal profile] smallhobbit
I have no doubt you will manage it!

Date: 2020-04-26 09:54 am (UTC)
smallhobbit: (Holmes Watson pipes)
From: [personal profile] smallhobbit
I agree, lovely to see another excerpt of this 'verse.

It must have been hard for Holmes not to rush to Watson's aid. Rose thorns can catch anyone whether or not they can see.

I am hoping Holmes will keep on the seaward side of the path when they go for a walk.

Date: 2020-05-24 11:00 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] scfrankles
Apologies for such a late comment. And I'm sorry there hasn't been a prompt up for May. Things have been a bit difficult (as they are for all of us at the moment) but there will definitely be a new prompt up 1st June ^_^

Sternly order your heart to stop panicking. You'd have made a dreadful parent. I thought this was a particularly insightful line. Watson is still vulnerable like a child, having to learn this major new life skill of navigating without his sight. But even though Holmes feels responsible for Watson's safety, he knows the only way Watson is going to regain his independence is if he stands back a little. There is a kind of courage in not trying to intervene, even though Holmes is horribly aware of every minor injury and is probably always worrying about what might happen too. The story shows Holmes' great respect for Watson, as well as his love.

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