Inky's Poem: Eve

[stonepicnicking_okapi]

Title: Eve
Rating: Gen
Length: 100
Note: Inky Quill, poet, expatriate, porcupine, humbly submits a teaspoon of palindromic verse, belated.

Lasts!
losing such sense common to cleaving limits
limits? within just, not without effort
embracing problems,
resolving morning, the in-cometh joy
custom means breaking dawn, promises, clock ticking,
competition, celebration, year’s last giving what-for
time in homemade promises and potions-of-wonder,
bubbling spirits, cups’ cusp
sparkling
new year’s
eve
year’s new sparkling cusp cups spirits bubbling wonder of potions and promises made
home in time for what? giving last year’s celebration competition
ticking clock promises dawn, breaking means, custom
joy cometh in the morning
re-solving problems, embracing effort without, not just within limits
limits cleaving to common sense
Such losing lasts.

Comments

[smallhobbit]

That is most impressive!

[stonepicnicking_okapi]

Thank you very much!

[scfrankles]

It's lovely to have Inky around again ^____^ And that is so beautiful, and so impressive technically too.

[stonepicnicking_okapi]

Yes, nice for Inky to be back at the quill. Thank you very much! I am sorry it's late but I wanted to make a nice neat drabble with it.

[debriswoman]

Applauding poem again...I don’t think I have tried this form...

[stonepicnicking_okapi]

Thank you! I think it is important to find the centre word first. It was the palindrome 'eve' that started me. And, in contrast to other kinds of verse, for me, it is easier to do this on computer first (not by hand). I can see it easier going forward and backward on the screen and edit easier.