I too like the bit with the fan - Holmes suddenly catching himself and quickly putting it away ^__^
I also really like the line: His mustache trembled and jerked so that it looked like it was about to leap off of his furious, bloated face. It's such a great bit of description.
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Date: 2018-06-23 01:42 pm (UTC)I also really like the line: His mustache trembled and jerked so that it looked like it was about to leap off of his furious, bloated face. It's such a great bit of description.