Bloody hell ^____^ Well played, madam. Very well played ^__^
I really admire how differently each half reads and feels, despite using the same words. I'll just pick out two sections that I particularly liked:
Absolute in fortune-seeking, darkness-cloaked villains betray embellishments. Life’s pieces puzzle like ruffled petals pink. Mystery, like scent, is distilled times hundred...
Like mystery, pink petals ruffled like puzzle pieces, life’s embellishments, betray villains.
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Re: Otto (palindrome poem)
Date: 2018-03-06 11:02 pm (UTC)I really admire how differently each half reads and feels, despite using the same words. I'll just pick out two sections that I particularly liked:
Absolute in fortune-seeking, darkness-cloaked villains betray
embellishments. Life’s
pieces puzzle like ruffled petals pink.
Mystery, like
scent, is distilled
times hundred...
Like mystery,
pink petals ruffled like puzzle pieces,
life’s embellishments,
betray villains.