Oh, lovely. I think it's wonderful. Especially the 'unexpected pleasure on the tongue.' I think the forms are like more like the 10 Suggestions, you know, starting points. Sometimes you get half-way through trying to play by the rules and say, 'fuck it' and as Debriswoman once wisely taught me, style should never trump substance.
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timeasmymeasure
Re: Red wine - a colour/color poem
Date: 2017-10-31 03:16 pm (UTC)