Date: 2017-08-10 09:30 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] scfrankles
I really like that you've chosen to concentrate on the attempt on the papers. I've seen stories in which the writer mulls over what the case of the politician, the lighthouse, and the trained cormorant is all about, but I don't think I've ever seen someone expand on the actual burglary before.

I did particularly like:

Even our most disorganized state in Baker Street had a cryptic sense of order while the scene in front of me was pure chaos.

And

Holmes added, as he seemed to be able to hear my unspoken thoughts, that the writer was pliable, prone to U-turns, thus indicating that he was likely a politician. ^___^

Also, welcome to the comm! It's so lovely to have a new member - and especially lovely to see someone posting over on the DW side ^__^
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