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http://scfrankles.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] holmes_minor2017-12-20 08:01 am
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The Poetry Page: On The Bummel with Mrs. Hudson

Welcome, everyone, to the Christmas edition of the poetry page!

I hope everyone is wrapped up warmly because we are about to catch the bus to Leadenhall Market, where we will be doing some carol singing in order to raise money for the impoverished children of the city. I believe Mr. Holmes will be meeting us there with his violin and will be supplying the music for carols old and new!

He will also be demonstrating his musical skills by improvising some tunes right there on the spot. And I thought it might be fun if we followed his example by coming up with our own lyrics for carols—to a familiar tune or not. The carols can be religious or secular, humorous or sombre, traditional or newfangled. Whatever takes your fancy.

To assist you in your ideas, here is a quotation from Dr. Watson’s story ‘A Study in Scarlet’, which was first published in Beeton's Christmas Annual:


Leaning back in the cab, this amateur blood-hound carolled away like a lark while I meditated upon the many-sidedness of the human mind.


🎻 🎄 🎻 🎄 🎻 🎄 🎻 🎄 🎻


Carols can take many forms, naturally. Here are a few suggestions:

221B verselet, abecedarian poetry, acrostic poetry, alexandrine, ballad, barzelletta, beeswing, blackout poetry, blitz poem, blues stanza, bref double, Burns stanza, call and response, chastushka, cherita, cinquain, circular poetry, clerihew, clogyrnach, colour poems, compound word verse, concrete poetry, Cornish verse, curtal sonnet, débat, décima, descort, diamante, doggerel, double dactyl, echo verse, ekphrasis, elegiac couplet, elegiac stanza, elfje, englyn, enuig, epigram, epistle, epitaph, epulaeryu, Etheree, fable, Fib, florette, found poetry, free verse, ghazal, haiku, hay(na)ku, In Memoriam stanza, Italian sonnet, jueju, kennings poem, lanturne, lies, limerick, line messaging, list poem, lyric poetry, mathnawī, micropoetry, mini-monoverse, musette, nonsense verse, palindrome poetry, pantoum, Parallelismus Membrorum, poem cycle, puente, quatern, quintilla, renga, rhyming alliterisen, riddle, rimas dissolutas, rime couée, rispetto, Schüttelreim, sedoka, septet, sestina, shadorma, sonnet, stream of consciousness, tanka, tercet, terza rima, tongue twister poetry, triangular triplet, tricube, trine, triolet, Tyburn, villanelle, xenolith


And here is the bus!

Remember—all completed carols can be left as comments on my page!

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2017-12-20 01:25 pm (UTC)(link)
In the bleak Midwinter
Holmes' violin did moan
He'd better change the tune soon
Or something will get thrown!
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[identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com 2017-12-20 02:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha! Very nice!

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2017-12-20 04:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2017-12-20 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Once in foggy London City
Holmes found geese in Covent Market
Which since they sell fruit and veggies
Was a strange place to have hark it!

[identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com 2017-12-20 05:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Hark how the sound
Screeches around
I want to say
"Throw that away!"

(Screeech. Sawwww. Screeech. Saaawww.)

All people here
Eyes full of tears
Young and the old
Blood running cold

Strings squealing long
What is that song?
Horrible thing
Not carolling

All seem to fear
When forced to hear
Notes lifting hair
Filling the air

Painfully ring
We're trying to sing
Songs of good cheer -
Get out of here!

(Quiet, quiet, Mr. Holmes be quiet)
(Quiet, quiet, Mr. Holmes be quiet)


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[identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com 2017-12-20 09:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice rhyme!
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[identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com 2017-12-20 09:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha, ha! A joyful noise isn't necessarily a sonorous one.

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2017-12-20 09:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Not sure they'll be raising much money ...

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2017-12-20 09:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you.

[identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com 2017-12-20 10:09 pm (UTC)(link)
A sign "PAY AND I STOP" in front of the hat should work.

[identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com 2017-12-20 10:11 pm (UTC)(link)
"Yes, Mr. Holmes, Scripture does indeed enjoin us to 'make a joyful noise unto the Lord' - but must your joy be so exceedingly noisy?"

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2017-12-20 10:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Ding, dong, merrily on high
Can someone pass the gin round
Ding, dong, my throat is much less dry
Another bottle's been downed

Glo-o-o-o-o-o(deep breathe)o-o-o-o-oria (and another)
Hosanna in excelsis
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[identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com 2017-12-20 11:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Now there's an earworm!

[identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com 2017-12-21 01:25 am (UTC)(link)
Oh good!
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[personal profile] debriswoman 2017-12-21 05:48 am (UTC)(link)
Definitely:-)
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[personal profile] debriswoman 2017-12-21 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
Well put!
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[personal profile] debriswoman 2017-12-21 05:50 am (UTC)(link)
Very vivid...teeth on edge just reading it.
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[personal profile] debriswoman 2017-12-21 05:51 am (UTC)(link)
Your good health, Mrs H

[identity profile] gardnerhill.livejournal.com 2017-12-21 06:26 am (UTC)(link)
That's what onomatopoeia is for!
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[identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com 2017-12-21 02:18 pm (UTC)(link)
God rest ye rattled Baker Street
Great pardon for y'dismay
The breaking glass, exploding gas 'twas seen on Christmas Day.
Was just a bit of science rogue, exper'ment gone astray.
Oh, oh--[that's all I got, sorry]

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2017-12-21 06:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2017-12-21 06:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha - pleased to hear it!

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2017-12-21 06:27 pm (UTC)(link)
I had to think of something while the choir were murdering Rutter's carols ...

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2017-12-21 06:27 pm (UTC)(link)
And yours, Mrs P!

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2017-12-21 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
No Mr Holmes, I do not consider this "Tidings of comfort and joy"
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[identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com 2017-12-21 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Fabulous! Especially like the last lines.

[identity profile] mafief.livejournal.com 2017-12-22 06:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Hehe, the Gloria part reminds me of so, so many church services.

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com 2017-12-22 07:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Sadly, this is so very true.