stonepicnicking_okapi: holmes in silohuette (holmessilouhette)
stonepicnicking_okapi ([personal profile] stonepicnicking_okapi) wrote in [community profile] holmes_minor2022-10-06 03:29 pm

Poem: Brooms: Gen

Title: Brooms
Poetic form: acrostic
Rating: Gen

...but which is best: the new broom or the old?

...reflect on which the better of the sleuths:

...old broom will find dust dark corners hold

...old broom, though, often bristles at new truths

...mayhap like puzzling out, like tracking down

...success sweeps best when new and old are bound
smallhobbit: (Holmes Top Hat)

[personal profile] smallhobbit 2022-10-06 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
What a great poem! And your final line is very true.
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[personal profile] debriswoman 2022-10-07 01:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Nicely done:-)
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[personal profile] gardnerhill 2022-10-07 05:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Very clever as well as truthful.