ext_1789368: okapi (0)
http://okapi1895.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] holmes_minor 2016-06-15 01:32 am (UTC)

Thank you. Yes, Holmes isn't sure how a direct offer of advice would be received so he's letting Watson think that he's discovered a new place for himself. But Holmes definitely didn't anticipate the consequence. And now he's sort of stuck.

And there was a line I deleted that would have made the ending more ambiguous. Did Mrs. Hudson know what Holmes was up to and was she chastising him for getting caught in a muddle of his own making or was it as you say. I didn't know how much to put her in things.

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