ext_1789368: okapi (0)
http://okapi1895.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] holmes_minor 2018-02-02 07:48 pm (UTC)

You're welcome. I think that Violet's competency kink would rival our friend Hobbit's and the most competent beau I could think of was Jeeves! And I do like the idea of Bertie running around a girls' school making an ass of himself in a Father Christmas robe while Jeeves falls in love.

Also, I tried to see if with the quintilla the rhyme scene had to be the same for each stanza or just the same pattern. I couldn't manage the former with 16 stanzas so I hope it's the latter and I didn't see any metre prescribed. But a Wise Poet once told me that style shouldn't prevail over substance, so I shan't worry too much :)

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