Date: 2016-05-28 08:34 pm (UTC)
ext_1620665: knight on horseback (0)
This is such a clever use of the form(s) - perfect fit. I liked in particular the subtle way you changed the beginning and ends of the letters as Trevor tried to be more formal. And I echo the applause for the use of a telegram for the six word story - inspired stuff.

The first version of the letter is so touching. I love: Regardless of latitude or longitude, I remain, Ever yours, Victor Trevor

I forgot to mention it when commenting on your other fic - I really love that the bull terrier is called Rasher ^^
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