http://thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] holmes_minor 2016-04-24 03:02 pm (UTC)

Exactly - I had to cut out about 20%. On reflection, when I realised the way it was going I should have stopped and written it with a different POV.

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