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SCFrankles ([personal profile] scfrankles) wrote in [community profile] holmes_minor 2020-07-18 03:24 pm (UTC)

That's such a beautiful interpretation of the prompt ^^ I love your vivid use of description to bring all the sounds to life. I particularly love:

...the steady tap or crunch or thump of his white cane.

...the rhythmic clunking sound of his Braille writer...

Every incidental sound John makes now is an echo of the same glorious rhythm that pillows my head and punctuates my sleep every night: the steady beat of his heart.

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