ext_1620665: knight on horseback (0)
http://scfrankles.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] holmes_minor 2016-08-26 10:55 pm (UTC)

I really liked the way you structured this - using the salmon metaphor. And I thought the description of Holmes' transformation was so wonderfully done - the change in his mind as much as the change in his body. You're so good at the subtleties of horror.
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